子供を育てて、もつ喜び、苦しみを知る
子供に振り回される人生か
子供と一緒に歩む人生なのか
その答えは毎日の生活に隠されている
遊楽の人生か
地獄の人生か
すべては自身発である覚悟が必要なのか
I bring up a child and know joy, the pains to have
The life swung around by a child
Is it the life to walk with a child?
The answer is covered by everyday life
The life of the play comfort
The life of the hell
Is the readiness that is from own all necessary?
子供を育てて、もつ喜び、苦しみを知る
子育て
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